I did not draw my character(s) to detail as that would take a loooong time (I haven't completely developed how I want it to look). So this is just the basic storyboard
Later when I looked at this again, I started rethinking two things:
1) Perhaps the depiction of the "houses making dark clouds" in panel 14 shouldn't be so literal.
2) Also the last panel may be something more subtle than something literal - although that was the original image that I based the whole poem on, perhaps it's a better ending to not have it so literally when it's put together as a story.
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